Please list 10 ways you can improve your essay scores
1.Express my point in more detail. 6.Lead into the quote I'm going to use more effectively.
2.Make sure that the quote i use fits my thesis 7.Try to find different ways to state my thesis.
3.Work on my spelling. 8.Work on my punctuation and mechanics.
4.Work on my voice I use in writing. 9.Work on explaining how each quote relates to my thesis
5.Improve my word choice and style of writing. 10.Don't rush to finsih even if I think I might not finish in time
Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5. For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).
1.It was funny when the Tralfamadorians closed their hands around their eye to tell Billy he was asking a dumb question.
2.I thought it was sad when the hobo died on the train and he was just throne aside.
3.I thought it was interesting when Billy was describing Dresden as being like the surface of the moon.
4.I also thought it was interesting when Billy was on Tralfamador.
5.I thought it was disheartening how his daughter was telling him what he could and could not do.
6.I also thought the time when Billy, the high school teacher, and their gaurd walked in on poeple who were taking a shower thinking it was the mess hall was funny.
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State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1.Death
2.Time travel
3.Life elsewhere
4.Sex
5.War
Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences. You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit. This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
Billy: Hello Cody.
Cody: Hello Billy.
Billy: Have you heard about the Tralfamadorians?
Cody: No. Who are they?
Billy: The Tralfamadorians are a race of forth dimensional beings who can look at any point in time be it past or future. Because they can look at any point in time they don't believe someone is dead when their body dies because they can see them in the past. So no one really dies they just only exist in the past.
Cody: Well that is interesting thank you for sharing this.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
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